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Ship sank.
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DAY 79:

KEEP SWIMMING!!!
you'd be surprised what desperation drives you to do.

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for #SixWordStories's around the world in 80 days contest.

edit: I have never posted smth that's been viewed over 200 times before. Thank you, thank you, thank you #SixWordStories for holding this comp and giving me second place <333
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
innocencedied2nite Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student Writer
Congrats! By the way... did they ever get there?
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student Writer
:iconlaplz::iconblinkthanksfavplz: <3

heheh, did they now? (smirks mysteriously) ...well personally, I like to think that they didn't make it in time, but were glad just to make it out of that ocean alive. Ultimately, though, you decide what fate they meet.
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innocencedied2nite Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student Writer
Somehow, I see them stuck on some deserted island somewhere. :giggle:
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Writer
:rofl:
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
innocencedied2nite Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Writer
:D They get to land and are all "LAND! YES!" look around... and then it's all..."Well... crap.."
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Writer
They've gotta have a story like that somewhere! XD Man, it'd be so epic. And they find a secret cave and battle wyverns and fly a dragon back home 0 - 0 a couple decades too late for the race, but who cares? :iconlawooplz:
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innocencedied2nite Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Writer
Oh man oh man... It would be so fun to write! I can just see their amazement when they realize just how much time has passed.

:la:
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Writer
what, didn't notice their beards? 0 - 0 or maybe it's an all-girl crew cuz having both genders on one deserted island just gets awkward. hah.
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icytemporalist Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
343 views, for only six words. Well done to you sir.
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student Writer
WOOHOO!!! :iconlawooplz: tonight shalt be a night of jubilee \o/

:iconlaplz::iconblinkthanksfavplz:
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zippip Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
This is AWESOME. Six words, and it's funny and uplifting. Nicely done.
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
:iconlawooplz: thanks! glad you think so~! <3
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Metarex12 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice. :meow: That was funny.
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student Writer
:highfive:
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AimeeRaindrop Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Interesting piece, and very humourous! But it took me a while to make the link between the fact that on day 2 the ship sank, and on day 79 they were still swimming. Perhaps it's just me being a bit dumb, but having day 2 as a title made me forget that the ship sinking happened then. That's my only real bugbear with this piece though, good job!
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student Writer
lol the time frame of day 2-day 79 was a bit forced, yes. I get the same feeling looking back at this. it's kind of cheating, but I couldn't think of a better way to shove in the setting.

thanks for the feedback! <3
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AimeeRaindrop Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Haha, ah I see. That's fair enough - it's still a good piece =)

You're welcome!
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OpenCagePoetry Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hahahahahaha.......good words of advice.
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Writer
lol, glad you think so! :iconlaplz::iconblinkthanksfavplz:
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FaeLuna13 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Writer
:rofl:
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Writer
:D and of course, :iconlaplz::iconblinkthanksfavplz: <3
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FaeLuna13 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! :heart:
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:iconvanessanon:
Vanessanon Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Professional Writer
:rofl:
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Student Writer
XD
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:iconangesauvage:
angesauvage Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
Hahaha
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Student Writer
:bow:
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:iconangesauvage:
angesauvage Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
i am glad that yours uses humour and well! good luck :)!
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Writer
XD thank you so much!!!
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:iconangesauvage:
angesauvage Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
you're welcome :)
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V-Oblivion Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Now this is epic, and inspiring.
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Student Writer
hehe. glad you think so!! never give up, yup :D
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Student Writer
hahahah, aaaaaaaaws :P
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Student Writer
XD
oh yeah! and congrats on getting through writing tourney round 1~! <3 saw you name on the list and was like, gosh darn it now i'm really gonna lose! well. we'll have a good fight yet. (for freedom! >:I)
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Writer
hahhaha! congrats to you too! hahah naah,I'm not so good. Weird,isn't it? so many of the odyssey participants seem to be in the same DA groups :D
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VolkesWagondaOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Student Writer
heehhh...that is weird. looks like it's a small world, after all
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